Monday, December 16, 2013

9 comments:

  1. I really like that story! I liked how you used the guys in our class and your enthusiasm in your voices. My favorite part was when Brandon said, "OHHHHHHHH aaaa!" Great job!

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  2. Nice story! I liked how you used the vocab. words to describe the "haunted" house.
    I think you should have made the ending a little more descriptive. Awesome job though!

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  3. I like how you put so much detail into your vocab story. Nice work!

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  4. I loved your wholoe idea of the "dare" story!! It was really cool and you guys had a strong voice with a lot of expression! The vocab words were used creatively in the story....I loved how you ended the mystery with Tyler behind it all along!

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  5. That was really awesome. The vocab. fit perfectly into the haunted house story.

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  6. The way you used the vocab words in the story was really creative. The idea of using your real names made it feel as if that was in real life. Awesome job!

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  7. I really liked how suspenseful your story was! I also liked how you used context clues with the vocab words.

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  8. I never quite understood what the word nondescript meant until listening to the context clues in the audio boo

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  9. I liked how you used the vocab words well enough so someone who didn't know the definitions could figure out what they meant and the creative storyline.

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